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Eikon
09-19-2007, 04:59 PM
fiery leaves
creek rolling along
autumns cusp
wats cusp, and wats da point
.Turbo
09-21-2007, 09:25 AM
sucks :P
Lukang
09-21-2007, 12:01 PM
eikon are u still working on it if not it sux no offence
Handbagstory
09-21-2007, 01:50 PM
What's the meaning of this.. Even the name doesn't make sence to me.. (and I always have some of the weirdest names)
Also 3 line poetry doesn't work, I don't get the whole thing of this.
its meant to have 3 lines. its haiku, a japanese form of poetry that consists of just 3 lines. i never got my head around this type of poetry but for what it is its interesting.
Handbagstory
09-21-2007, 02:02 PM
Ah that makes sence, still don't get it but ohwell.
Eikon
09-27-2007, 01:09 AM
http://m-w.com/dictionary/haiku
I did a not uncommon shorter version, which is 3-5-3
Get some learning folks, this *IS* the poetry section. :P
Lukang
09-27-2007, 01:28 AM
http://m-w.com/dictionary/haiku
I did a not uncommon shorter version, which is 3-5-3
Get some learning folks, this *IS* the poetry section. :P[/b]
yes sir (as if)
Handbagstory
09-27-2007, 07:10 AM
Yes sir. But I never heard of the poems, exept 1 - 2 times maybe.. So..
Eikon
09-27-2007, 08:23 PM
Nah, I understand.....But they are some of the hardest poems to write because of the rigid structures.
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