FLAWLESS IMPERFECTIONS

[steezyskater]

FLAWLESS IMPERFECTIONS

You see yourself in the pouring rain,
No one to pull you out of the storm
I'd go but you'll only keep me there
So I can feel your strain.

I did nothing to earn your cold shoulder
But I receive it none-the-less
Lead me on for it's only darkness
That I can see.

CnC plzz

[Rami]

That's fantastic, Striker..... :thumbsup:

[Rami]

That's fantastic, Striker..... :thumbsup:

[FriendlyGuy]

nice job d00d™

[Handbagstory]

Could have more flow if you ask me. It was a bit weird to read.

[.Turbo]

FLAWLESS IMPERFECTIONS

thought this thread would be about a band.

it's cool but i don't really know poetry.

[Digital.X]

Good job, but I must agree with Dream, it does read a little weird.