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SarahBear
01-20-2008, 09:14 AM
Slowly tears Seep out
Long Lies seep in
How deep they cut no one knew
Until the day she Cried
The day she Lived
The day she knew someone cared
The tears grew small the Lies grew Big
as did the will,
and she knew someone cared.

Handbagstory
01-20-2008, 09:25 AM
Slowly, tears seep out
Long lies, seep in
How deep they cut
No one knew

Until the day, she cried
The day, she lived
The day,
She knew, someone cared

The tears grew small
The lies grew big
And so did the will

But she knew,
Someone cared
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This is how I should write it myself. None-the-less, a nice poem. But, I should try to give it more flow next time =]