A Moment.

[IsuNnYi]

baby its a moment we had that lasted us years
one moment, a great meeting it lasts forever
lost in space wit your thoughts, missing those joyful tears
there all gone now, see me happy now never
come back in my dreams why did you have to walk out
now there sleepless nights and unspeakable thoughts
on the wrong path wanna head to the right route
loving you is the way i choose theres no left or right
always wanna keep you in my sight day or night
here waiting dreaming thinkin talkin about you
stupid of me to think of you, but theres nothing else to do
can keep talkin bout you hour or day, week or year
guess its all gone memorys will still last me forever

[Plan-B]

i like it........but i feel there need some editng here and there, imo (but i'm bad at writing songs/poetry, so imight be wrong)

like this bit: always wanna keep you in my sight day or night
imo it should be always wanna keep you in my sight day and night

not sure, but overall, i like it alot, gives a cloudy/soft picture to me.......which is good

kiu

[IsuNnYi]

lol thanks i dont write poems i usally write raps and record my songs this was for fun =]