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bleach
02-06-2008, 05:14 AM
tried somethign different for it since i iddnt like the first one so here goes

cnc

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o55/grandemarshal/zoomlensentersite.png

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o55/grandemarshal/newzoomlenstemp.png

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o55/grandemarshal/finalzoomleninterfacecopy.png

Da link http://aksarben09.deviantart.com/art/Zoom-lens-76685117

would appreciate comments

griffinax
02-06-2008, 05:23 AM
alot better and sexy, dude ;D

Plan-B
02-06-2008, 05:51 AM
nice, looks great

kiu

though in the second one, i'd move the photogrpaher portfolio text down abit, as its 2 much 2 the edge imo

Inferno
02-06-2008, 06:13 AM
last one is smex

gj on this
cant really see any flaws
kiu impro

bleach
02-06-2008, 11:44 PM
thanks for the comments , anyone got any specific things i can improve on , im sure there some , and id like to improve

also would appreciate comments on DA http://aksarben09.deviantart.com/art/Zoom-lens-76685117

Handbagstory
02-07-2008, 07:43 AM
It's too.. Round + the coloring isn't very appealing.
Try to make it more, cleaner, and relaxing to stay with.

SheSaidSheWas18
02-07-2008, 07:49 AM
wow its amazing

just a bit messy

AngleBox
02-17-2008, 01:18 PM
looks abit to cartoonish but good job :)