remake of my first web template

[bleach]

tried somethign different for it since i iddnt like the first one so here goes

cnc

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o55/grandemarshal/zoomlensentersite.png

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o55/grandemarshal/newzoomlenstemp.png

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o55/grandemarshal/finalzoomleninterfacecopy.png

Da link http://aksarben09.deviantart.com/art/Zoom-lens-76685117

would appreciate comments

[griffinax]

alot better and sexy, dude ;D

[Plan-B]

nice, looks great

kiu

though in the second one, i'd move the photogrpaher portfolio text down abit, as its 2 much 2 the edge imo

[Inferno]

last one is smex

gj on this
cant really see any flaws
kiu impro

[bleach]

thanks for the comments , anyone got any specific things i can improve on , im sure there some , and id like to improve

also would appreciate comments on DA http://aksarben09.deviantart.com/art/Zoom-lens-76685117

[Handbagstory]

It's too.. Round + the coloring isn't very appealing.
Try to make it more, cleaner, and relaxing to stay with.

[SheSaidSheWas18]

wow its amazing

just a bit messy

[AngleBox]

looks abit to cartoonish but good job :)