unknown

[clash]

I am walking
towards the unknown
don't know what to
know, what to
anticipate, what to
do, what to
feel, what to
look
I should come clean
I'm scared to death
maybe that's just
what awaits for me
death
and the ripper
seeking and
smelling and
crying and
shouting and
dieing
walking alone
in that darkness
towards the light
towards the unknown...


I've been writing poetry for ages now... never been to any competition, I just write it for my self and my pleasure =) (hope you like)

[Handbagstory]

I don't like the repeation of the word 'and' and 'to'.
They are used a bit too much I think.

Rest is nice, well done =]

[Plan-B]

umm its something new imo, which i like

it sets a pretty good scene in my mind,, kiu