Forbidden Supremacy

[Raynbow]

This delightful poison
Nurtures my feverish soul,
Coursing through my veins
Etching your name on my heart.
Relentless dreams haunt my existence,
Embarking on a journey into the unknown
With only my troubled emotions to guide me.
Like razor blades, cutting through the endless night.
A burning desire consumes my already pierced heart,
Reaching for the untouchable,
Falling from the wings of time,
Trapped, in the maze that is you.
An intense power simmers deep inside,
Patiently awaiting the exhilarating rush of your kiss
Drowning in its own potency.
Anticipating a collision of two wandering souls,
Searching for eternal bliss,
Craving an immortal union of lingering caresses
That can cure the bleeding of a tortured mind.
A once broken heart surges with ardent desire,
Prising itself from the screeching torment of its captor.
Liberating itself, only to surrender
To the Forbidden supremacy of love.

[Plan-B]

nice, some parts are written very well... though i feel some parts are abit long, though i may be wrong as i don't kno much about poetry, i jsut enjoy reading it. good job, kiu

[Handbagstory]

Maybe stanza's would work.
But I'm not here to CnC your poetry.

It's pretty nice =]