If you gonna cry,ima cry twice

[.legacy]

<div align="center">wonderin if im last
all good shit goes blast
bad goes from down to best
live getting rough,no place for anyone
im lost
im high,too
feeling so much about you
cause i was ****ed,im still ****ed
hope ud correct me up
always tryin to be undercontrol...
sorry for the problems i've put ur heart in
just gimme ur hands
ima make this love advance


reason of this poem :after i got apart from my last gf about 1 year ago , and almost got over it ,just started contacting a nice girl,liking her much,cant stop seeing her pictures as if im addicted to it...started thinking of writing this poem when i was high,thats how it came to me..
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[Handbagstory]

All I can say.
Write PROPER English when you're writing.

That's all what I don't like.

EMOTIONAL FOR THE WIN =]

[impact.]

EMOTIONAL FOR THE WIN =][/b]


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[Handbagstory]

OMG AW XD

[.Turbo]

whys this in gangsta speach.

if you're in love, keep it to yourself.

i dislike this poem.

[.legacy]

thanks for the replies.. actually thats how i like it better but ima try like dreamo said ima try porper english!!