First Large Piece

[ELITE]

original pic
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e109/abyz/Alcatraz_prison_cell.jpg

my outcome
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e109/abyz/largeartcopy.png

comments? plz be kind

[brandonc1]

im confused on what you are trying to get across with the final.. i liek how you gave it a dark/older feel. i just dont get the dark spots.. it feels like you are wanting to explain something with it. but what i cannot find ?

hmm i think that this sint a bad idea. just make it more clear. id thats what you were doing anyhow.
i think you could have maybe instead of a soft edge. maybe a grunged edge you know. to add to the efeect of the peice.
overall. i am pretty sure it blows my first piece away.
not bad bro. =]

[ELITE]

idk, i kinda wanted it to look like the darkness was overcoming the cell... idk how to explain it

[brandonc1]

in that case. maybe try having it fade a bit more... and maybe the red shadows shouldnt be there.

[Crni Lovac]

dont like it...the effects have no meaning and you just ruined the original picture