Golden Beaches

[.Turbo]

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A poem about Faust.


Contours of the golden beaches brown under the sun,
Feet of faust stand pointing out to sea;
Patriotic and Superior,
Bursts of inspiration shine through the light clouds;
Yet faust desires more
Because you can never please that bastard.

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[faust.]

ownage :D

****

[SaIRoS]

that's the best so far!

Because you can never please that bastard.[/b]

[blackwallstreet]

wow wat a load of *Censored* lol

[.Turbo]

wow wat a load of *Censored* lol[/b]

gee thanks "friend" :huh:

[AkanePen]

lmao I laughed so much after reading this.It's full of awesome :D ****

[FriendlyGuy]

lmao, u can never please the bastard, classic, great i love it

[.Turbo]

BUMP :P

[neotoxin]

Bump is justified. I like the poem, though I know not of whom you speak. I am reluctant to rate it, because I am a spoken word artist myself and we tend not to put a fixed score on a piece of work.

[.Turbo]

faust is a cocky guy who reckons he's best at everything. i wrote this when he went on holiday to the caribbean. hope that makes it make more sense.

[neotoxin]

It TOTALLY makes more sense to me now. Great fucking poem!

[.Turbo]

fuck yeah!

[neotoxin]

America, fuck yeah![/b]
Fixed :D

[.Turbo]

i don't use uppercase letters much so it would be 'america, fuck yeah!'

BUMP everyone should read my sexy poem.

[Albers]

i don't use uppercase letters much so it would be 'america, fuck yeah!'

BUMP everyone should read my sexy poem.[/b]

that's a smexy poem not a sexy one ;)

[neotoxin]

Agreed. Smexy is the proper term to be used for this poem.